Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Difficulties in Writing a Short Story


Writing a short story has two difficult parts; the beginning and the ending. It was so hard for me to find a topic that i felt comfortable writing about. Once I started writing, it all flowed out. The end is a whole different story. Why is it so hard to end a good story? Since, this story had to be a minimum of eight pages and a maximum of ten, I didn't think that I would need more paper, but I did! I feel that the end of my story is rushed, and has no foundation. Rules suck! Overall ending my story was my most difficult task, because you can't end a story that doesn't feel complete.

Thursday, November 20, 2008

Stiletto....


I love shoes! My favorite shoe would have to be the Stiletto. The stiletto shows dominance in a woman and security. They exert confidence when a woman walks. I prefer the 31/2 to 4 inch stiletto. I like feeling tall, yet in control of every step I make. It's always a gamble walking in them. I try not to fall or stumble. I've gotten so good over the years I can run in them! Stilettos go as far back as to 1500 B.C. Girls complain about how hard it is to walk in 4 inches, but women in 1500 walked in 23 inches! I think it's pretty amazing, the history of this shoe. I love Stilettos!

Thursday, November 13, 2008

Pertaining to me

The quote by William Saroyan "Good people are good because they've come to wisdom through failure.." pertains to me and others in many ways. To get where a person wants to be in life there are many obstacles that a person has to overcome. Whether they be emotional, educational, or physical all goals has obstacles. The first time may not go as plan, and a person may fail over and over again. By learning from their mistakes it will be easier the next time to eliminate the wrong answers. To be a wise person is to have failed, so that you can relate.
Who is?

Who is individuality?
I wanna be like her,
She wanna be like me.
I want what he got,
What he got she got
Conformity is key to our community.
But I don’t understand why I just cant be me.
And let the individuality shine within me.
Music

Music
Melodic, Harmony
Repeating, Wording, Melting
Sweet nothings in my ear
Music
The Tulip Garden
I see Tulips
It taste like happiness
It smells like spring water
It sounds like serene music
It feels like Heaven
The Tulip Garden
Winter Days
The winter is filled with happiness.
The winter is cold, nail biting weather.
The winter is children playing in the snow.
I like the winter.
It covers up all the dirt and grime this world has to offer.
The winter is the safety net for our society.
So that society can feel their doing something right.
In the winter you can’t see the trash in the streets,
You can’t see the homeless in need,
You can’t see the bad in people only their good deeds.
The feeling is magical.
Christmas lights glare all day long,
And you can smell the pine tree before you reach home.
Tis’ the night Jesus was born, we celebrate forgetting everything else.
But being close to love ones, we feel whole.
We feel like napkins,
Before they unfold.
I wish winter was everyday, because those days are the only days,
Everyone’s home.